What if France Had
Fought On From North Africa? Part IV
Scenario Seeds
Dies The Fire
(Review)
Early End To The Ice Age
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I have mixed emotions about Dies
the
Fire. It has multiple levels of implausibility that are
going to make it difficult for a lot of people to take it
seriously. On the other hand, if you can get past the initial
suspensions of disbelief that the story forces on you this isn’t a bad
book. It has several strong and interesting characters and moves
well. It gets stronger as it goes along.
First let’s look at the implausibility problems. Dies the Fire is in the same
fictional universe as Stirling’s Island in the Sea of Time
series. It looks at what happened to the timeline we’re in when
the island of Nantucket went back in time. It’s set in 1998, and
as Nantucket goes back in time, most of the advanced tools of
civilization in our world stop working. Nothing electrical
works. Cars and planes stop working. Firearms don’t
work. Gunpowder burns too slowly to fire a projectile.
Steam engines can no longer build up enough pressure to be of much
use.
The first plausibility problem is that an awful lot of physical laws
change without apparently having much impact on anything other than
human technology. Anything electrical is dead, but there is no
apparent impact on animal nervous systems that depend on electrical
impulses. Presumably lightning still strikes (otherwise the
climate would change in unpredictable ways). Presumably the earth
still generates a magnetic field. Otherwise solar radiation
becomes a major problem because the fields that steer a lot of those
particles around the earth collapse. Presumably photovoltaics
(solar cells) don’t work, but the closely related processes involved in
photosynthesis do. Hot air still expands and rises, but if you
try to confine it in a steam engine that hot air will only expand to a
certain point. If you add more heat, either air or energy just
disappears.
If you have much knowledge of chemistry, physics, and/or electronics
you will reach a point where suspension of disbelief is close to
impossible. The world works the way it does because of a set of
physical principles. Those principles are inter-related enough
that changing them enough to effectively deny us electricity, internal
combustion engines, and all effective explosives would also change the
way the world worked in huge and unpredictable ways. If you have
a hard science background and you want to read this book, you’ll need
to treat the changes as magic. Just say to yourself, “The elder
gods or alien space bats took our toys away and that’s all there is to
it.”
The second plausibility problem is that too many characters in the
story have just the right skill set or tools for the situation. I
almost gave up on the story at least three times because the
combination of tools or skills just seemed too improbable. The
world of Dies the Fire is
inhabited by an improbably large number of
expert archers, people that know how to handle horses, and people who
(I kid you not) go to their closets to get out their Roman short swords
or to the warehouse to get out their horses and wagons. It’s true
that such people exist and might thrive in this new situation, but the
introduction of so many odd-ball skills strains an already tenuous
suspension of disbelief.
The third plausibility problem is that most of the characters in the
story just tamely accept the new limitations. Maybe I hang around
a higher than normal number of techno-geeks, but I know a lot of people
who would be trying frantically to find ways around the new
limitations. They would be trying to find out exactly what the
limitations are. They would be asking a lot of questions.
Do permanent magnets still work? What happens if you rig one up
with some copper wire and try to make a primitive generator? Can
you still generate static electricity by scruffing your foot on a
carpet or rubbing a balloon on a cat? Do electronic devices work
inside a Farraday cage? Does gunpowder work if you filter the air
to make sure nothing out of the ordinary is in it? If you put
dissimilar metals together in a medium that normal allows electron
flow, does that flow still happen? Do flywheels still work to
store energy? Do capacitors still hold a charge? Can you
still store energy in springs? Do windmills still generate
power? (They could be very useful even if you can’t store the
power as electricity). Do solar cells still work? What
about a solar powered Stirling cycle engine? Does gasoline still
burn at the same rate it did? Does it still have the same
properties when you mix it with other chemicals? If you can’t
build up pressure in a steam engine beyond a certain point, what
happens if you build it up to that point and then pump air out of the
room the steam engine is in? That increases the pressure
difference between inside and outside the engine, which is effectively
the same thing as generating higher pressure inside the engine.
Can you use a series of thin-walled steam engine cells ganged together
to produce a useable steam engine?
Trying to find ways around the “speed limit” would be absolutely
vital. If it couldn’t be done, millions of people would
die. Almost everybody over about 60 would probably die within a
matter of
months from the
burden of work and illnesses that we can cure . The rest would
live a hard life that typically ended not
much after 40. Most of the people that survived would end up as
the equivalent of peasants. It would be morally imperative to try
to find ways to keep technological civilization going, and none of the
major characters in the book even appears to think about trying.
The people I hang around would also take a very different approach to
personal defense than the characters in this book. For personal
defense my techno-geek friends would probably look at whether or not
pepper spray and other non-lethal gases still worked. A few of
them could probably rig up more lethal gases, though they might not
actually do that due to storage problems and the danger of killing
themselves. They would probably buy up the highest power air
rifles they could find—good for rabbit hunting and discouraging people
you don’t want around. They would look at ways of modifying those
air rifles for increased penetrating power—quite feasible under normal
physical conditions. They would see if any of the many explosive
compounds that chemists are aware of still worked. In order to
keep projectile weapons and explosives from working, our ‘alien
spacebat' friends would have to keep a lot of substances from working
the way they normally would, including match heads and lighter fluid to
name a few. If no other projectile weapons would work, a lot of
people would probably improvise throwing spears or darts rather than
going for bows and arrows because of the steep learning curve to become
a good archer. If they designed improvised crossbows, they would
probably go for some kind of repeater design.
I doubt that the initial weapons technologies would be anywhere near as
medieval as they are in the book. People would improvise armor
and arms from the abundant high-quality metal in cars and especially
trucks. They would find ways to use parts of truck beds as armor,
truck springs as the basis for projectile weapons, gasoline from trucks
and cars for ‘Molotov cocktails’, glass and metal for spear points, and
so on. I’m not at all sure those improvised weapons would be all
that inferior to medieval-style ones. We live in an environment
filled with tools potentially lethal enough to awe your average
medieval knight.
While people still accepted money, smart people would probably go to
the hardware store and buy up things like saw blades (maces made out of
circular saw blades set in a wooden handle?), drywall hammers,
hatchets, crowbars, bicycles, binoculars and telescopes, bottled water,
mechanical water filters, and lengths of PVC pipe, to mention just a
few things that would prove useful. Over-the-counter pain
relievers like aspirin would be another smart purchase, as would
vitamins, cigarettes, toilet paper, and birth control devices.
For the first few weeks fresh water would be a more precious commodity
than food. People without access to water would die in less than
a week. People with water and no food could survive uncomfortably
for up to a few months, depending on how much body fat they started out
with and whether or not they had access to vitamins.
The fourth plausibility problem is that government and communications
tend to collapse more easily and completely than I suspect they would
under this scenario. Governments tend to show a much smarter side
of themselves when their power is seriously threatened. At the
state and federal level at least some of the powers that be would
realize that lack of communications seriously threatened their ability
to govern. How would they overcome that? Initially with
bike messengers. They could find avid bicyclists that routinely
do 50 to 100 mile rides in a day, and use them to set up long-distance
messenger relays—sort of like a bicycle version of the pony express,
only replacing the rider instead of the horse. You could probably
get a message 200 miles in a day in an emergency once the system was
operational. In the longer term, smart governments would probably
set up signal towers with gas or kerosene lights and mirrors. In
reasonably flat terrain they could use telescopes to extend the
distance messages could be sent, especially at night.
Communications would allow governments to bring in troops to areas
where local government power is threatened. Those troops would no
longer have projectile weapons, but they would still have advantages,
like much better body armor than anything civilians would be able to
improvise, good stocks of MREs initially, and discipline.
Bicycles would be at an absolute premium for moving troops, and
governments would undoubtedly confiscate a lot of them. Once
railroads were cleared, governments would probably build bicycle-based
vehicles to move men and goods along them. Even without trains,
control of railroad lines would mean the ability to move men and
materials more quickly.
Governments would try to get water pumping systems working on some
basis in the cities, even if it meant drafting people to sit for eight
or twelve hours at a time peddling improvised bike-based pumps.
If they fail to get enough water, the cities would quickly become
untenable. Governments would try to get anybody in the major
cities whose job went away due to the ‘event’ out to the surrounding
farms. Farms would be desperately short of manpower to protect
the harvest and get it in. The problem would be in training and
hardening the city people (and a lot of farmers who were used to
sitting in an air-conditioned tractor) enough to make them useful.
Undoubtedly some areas would collapse into anarchy temporarily.
Escaped prisoners would complicate matters a lot. Without guns
the guards would lose control of at least some of the prisons and
thousands of escaped prisoners would add to an already chaotic
situation. The cities of over a million people would simply be
untenable. There wouldn’t be any way to move that many people out
the distance they would need to be moved or to house them once they
were moved. You also wouldn’t be able to move enough food or
water in to maintain all of those people, especially in California,
where major cities are built in deserts and maintain themselves by
pumping water from great distances.
Given the timing of this event (1998), I was surprised that nobody
mentioned Y2K as a possible explanation for the event. Granted,
it wouldn’t explain everything, but it would probably be the first
explanation a lot of people thought of. Fear of Y2K would also
play a role in that some people were already stocking up for what they
thought would be the collapse of civilization, so at least some people
would have somewhat larger stocks of easily portable food than normal.
As I said at the beginning of this review, if you can get past the
initial plausibility problems this is not a bad book. If you’re a
hard science person, be prepared to throw the book down a couple of
times and walk away saying “NO. It can’t work that way.” I
did. I also went back and continued reading. I’m glad I
did, because this is not a bad story at all if you’re willing to treat
the ‘event’ as essentially magic and overlook quite a few other
plausibility
problems.
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